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da rose by Karaikou
da rose
Something Forumsdackel created alongside some other people a while ago. The wings were supposed to look even worse/more beautiful but i messed them up sorry ;A; 
The sketch and shading was done traditionally with pencils and whatnot and the colors were added afterwards in Paint Tool SAI. 
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AVA 1 - Thunder in the distance by Karaikou
AVA 1 - Thunder in the distance
My entry for the first round of CrispyCh0colate's :iconartistvsartist:ArtistVsArtist contest. =) 

finally wanted to draw something aside from cats and cat-ish looking canines... Drawing humans (and lineless) is still a big struggle to me, so feedback would be greatly appreciated.  


Be sure to check out the other entries as well!! artistvsartist.deviantart.com/…
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... please let me know. 
I don't really recall having had any open requests/trades/commissions, but then again I haven't been around for more than a year. x_x

I'll try to get more active and upload more things from now on. orz  
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Driftingkit by Dictator-Wolfeye
Hi, I'm just a random stranger looking for something critique-able. (: English is not my native language so I'll apologize for any mistakes in advance, haha.
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This is really adorable!
I like the pose a lot, because it makes the character appear all innocent and playful. The eyes are also very well done, since the color palette you used for shading them makes them stand out and immediately catch the viewer's attention. <3
Even though I feel like the fur is a bit too short for a kitten, I love how you put so much effort into the fur structure and shading. When zooming in closer and seeing all those tiny little hairs and fur tufts I was like, 'Man, that must have taken an eternity.'

Despite not exactly being an expert on shading myself, I think you could try to create an even stronger shadow/light contrast.
In order to make lineless work you could, for example, use brighter colors where the outlines are supposed to be and create some kind of back-light like here fav.me/d4283uw where the artist hinted the outlines of the hindpaws etc by using a soft blue.
Also, you could try to vary the color hues a bit like you did with the eyes (going from a dark red to a light orange). Especially the ears only use absolute gray hues and I think a bit more color would make the picture look way more lively. (=

But seriously, you did a really great job on this. I hope my critique was somewhat helpful to you~

Have a nice day!

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Mona
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Hey there.
My name is Mona, I'm a teen and I come from Germany.

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Forumsdackel Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
U WERE MY FIRST WATCHA
OLD TIEMZ
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Forumsdackel Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DOHNT IGNOA MIIßßßß????????
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marmaIade Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Student General Artist
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Forumsdackel Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DU KAKKNOOP
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marmaIade Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Student General Artist
RAI DU BIST WIEDER DA
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